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Senses Open

I feel you touching
I hear you breathing
Such pleasure
To feel this treasure
All of this
Such bliss
I can't resist
You persist
My senses found
Loves sound.

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  • EvansV
    July 21
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    love it

    it has been a while and thank you for your comments on my poetry


  • Jeb
    April 5, 2008

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    Great!

    This is really good! It is short, sweet and conveys a beautiful message. I really like the way you wrote this, it has an awesome flow to it. It was great to read something from you again!