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her aura

The earth's her stage,the sky her backdrop,
celestial bodies her spectators, watching from rooftop.
She has taken a bow and all hearts have skipped a beat,
in anticipation to witness the greatest of all feat.
She slowly begins to perform with intense agility,
accelerating her motion with elegance and dexterity.
She dances it seems for ever, what day what night,
None want to leave, who wants to miss this blissful sight.
The world gets mesmerized with her beautiful dance,
eyes not blinking, lest they might miss a glance.

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dance is my passion. rest - the poem says it all.

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    April 6, 2008

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    Your first two lines really draw me in and I don't want to stop reading, I want to keep reading it again and again


    Thank you & Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • NeonRose
    April 5, 2008

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    absolutely beautiful! An elegant, well designed write, with some grand imagery. I enjoyed reading this.