encompassing passage
blissful new dimensions
tunnel through brilliance deranged
pattering echoes
disturbing silence
her existence rediscovered
this universe bizarre
Author notes
I really tried
A contest entry
- 10 hour quickie - Surrealism! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
300 points, ended April 4, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Trying is the most important thing! hehe. I like this. It's simple in meaning but complex in vocabulary, which I guess adds to the mixture of abstract/surreal feel.
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LoLz you tried XD
I actually really liked this poem g-to-the-Rob, despite the fact that it was rather short. Perhaps you ran out of "bizarre" things to say?? lol All in all, I really enjoyed it though -
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the contest says 20 words or less I used 19 I think
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i like this, it's a very nice look at the picture and veyr deep
great write and good luck in the contest
take care
stephanie =)
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