innocence lives to see all with a
purity of inner love and spiritual
grasp to embellish the lives of all
with selfless desire to be in harmony
returns to fly alone in the heavens
of lies and deceit spawned to crush
the loss and to spread guilt and no
remorse to the virtue seekers lacking
chastity
Author notes
prompt: innocence
A contest entry
- A View of the Simple Things.. by surface--tension.
600 points, ended April 6, 2008, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i really like the flow of this poem. the way you lead the reader on line by line until finally the point is driven. the only thing i'd take out in my opinion is the animation. i think its wonderful just by itself. but that's just my opinion. thank you so much for entering, and good luck!
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Excellent
I really like the flow of this. Keep up and the great work and good luck in the contest
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