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Notebook


Clock ticks too loud
drank too much wine
her mother would frown if she knew
but she doesn't

dips the silver spoon
into black coffee
she hadn't felt this rough in ages
pleased she was

no work today
no need to wash
glanced at the notebook by her hand
pages unwritten

hands too timid.









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  • Randomly Beautiful
    April 7, 2008
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    Nicely done. Thanks for the entry.


  • Dalaney gold member
    April 5, 2008

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    You are as good at free verse
    as you are with rhyme - such a
    stunning piece of poetry here,
    Hilly. I adore it. Love, Lane