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Waiting For You

Can't stop thinking of you,
No matter how the pain kills me.
And I wonder where you are,
Each time your name comes to mind.

I miss everything about you,
Even though I never even saw you.
Ever.

I can see you laying there,
Each night I stay awake.
As the insomnia takes over us both,
We think of our last talk.

And I wish you could understand,
I feel like I can't wait forever.
But my love is going on forever,
And I promise you,
I will stay here.

In hopes that I can have you.
And never fade away;
Lonely and Afraid.

Author notes

I guess this is to David.
I love him so much.
Makes my tummy and heart melt.

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  • Asylaarix
    April 4, 2008

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    I think this is very beautiful ... you tell yourself out ... and put it out there on the line for this David ... he should be very greatful to have such a wonderful person in his life ... you are very amazing and your poetry soars through my mind like a beautiful breeze ... very powerfully penned ... much love to you and good luck to you as well ...

    ♥Chantelle


    • KateMadness
      April 5, 2008
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      Oh thanks

      Oh...thank you!
      My poetry is like a beautiful breeze? Wow...never had that said to me. I like it though, and so now I will feel happier about writing. :]
      -Kori