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The Taste Of Man - HM


I can live without a man.  I can.

Sticks and stone relationships
were much of what I knew

such meaty clench and marrow’s succulence
as if the taste would stay fresh
forever

until one day, I was the tooth
that struck a bone dry end.

I have been gnawing desert-dry
petrified stone
that has no flavor

like that I remember
when juices ran.





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  • Randomly Beautiful
    April 7, 2008

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    I was the tooth
    that struck a bone dry end.

    Very nice entry. Thank you so much.


  • Night Hope gold member
    April 6, 2008

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  • PageTurner
    April 4, 2008

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    "I have been gnawing desert-dry
    petrified stone
    that has no flavor

    like that I remember
    when juices ran."


    ...Sighhh


    I feel the sorrow to my marrow, m'Lady.

    ~ Nicky♥