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offering your hand

 

Sometimes you stop and think of how~

so many travel miles upon a heart

offering you're hand, ...hoping to take part

.

Helping someone see through darkness

has always been a work of art

offering you're hand, ...hoping to take part

.

You are not an exception my friend

showing how God lives in your heart

offering you're hand, ...hoping to take part

.

Not to many desciples hear all his words 

he gave you good guidence, your smart

offering you're hand, ...hoping to take part

 

 

Author notes

Spiritual Poet I would like to thank you for just being there.

Your a true heart with a great love for all, God bless!

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    April 25, 2008
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    Hood-Winked!

    I don't like how you have 'thru' instead of 'through', I think you had 'your' instead of 'you're', and there are some spelling errors - but apart from those things this is a beautiful dedication and I really enjoyed the love behind your words - congratulations on the honourable mention

    Keep writing

    Polly


  • quack silver member
    April 18, 2008
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    this is really nice thanks for entering


  • Spiritual Poet gold member
    April 18, 2008

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    Thank you Gary

    This is a kind tribute and I am s deeply appreciative. I do try and hear his words and reach out and help people as he would have me to do. God bless you my brother, Mark

  • Ir.muse
    April 4, 2008

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    hello dear uncle,

    I missed your unfinished poems and I'm sure you also missed my comments on them.
    Wish you luck in the contest.

    Shahrzad


  • grannyeri gold member
    April 4, 2008
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    I am sure it will be something special too - did you forget those two things you were going to add to my page - one was the extra new granddaughter, the other was the name plate of the library group. Thanks. WIll check this one again when it is complete. Have a great day!

    Erika

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