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Life Still Yet Inside Of Me !

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Here on this lonely road ,of sand I stand alone
Yet I'm not alone though, as you may see

Instead two souls and bodies, joined into one
For a baby is here ,in me that I carry

Can you not see my baby inside of me, in front of the cloud's you see?
I pray some one picks us up,for thirsty we and I am

Water that I wish to drink ,it is so hot out here
So that my baby inside of me will be ok I bestow

Being hydrated we shall ,live instead of die
Out here in the desert side,alone far away from home


Written By:Brenda Gae Harper

April 4, 2008

 

 

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I have been really being challenedged by these picture prompt Contest . And now that I see how they work , I also would be honored when I am able to " Pay It Forward "

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  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    May 26, 2008

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    wow a very deep piece you penned here hon it almost can go for a def poetry jam on russells simmons on hbo i love this you did a great job here


  • NeverSayAddiction
    May 7, 2008
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    wow...

    I actually liked this a lot...NICE!!! write...


  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    April 9, 2008

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    I liked this one, lots of imagery here. How sad! You did really good , I hope you won something out of this my friend...~~Iridessa Moonflower~~


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    April 6, 2008

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    This is very different to what I was expecting for the picture but this is powerful!
    I wanted to cry as you envoke different imagery in my mind

    ♥
    Thank you & Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda