Playing with the hem of her little pink dress,
Her mind's lost in thought for the prefaced
Holocaust she had seen unpreparedly.
Alone, standing still;
She tries to clear the mess in her head.
Looking down, & twirling around,
The wind blowing her soft hair.
Thoughts blown gently in & out of her head,
As she plays with the hem
Of her little pink dress.
A contest entry
- Paying It Forward -Again- by Manda Kathryn.
450 points, ended April 6, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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The innocence of this is powerful as you repeat the first line as the last line, locks in the image of a young girl and her pink dress.
A lovely read
♥
Thank you & Best of luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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oh lill sis:? this is amazing your have done an excellent job i loved your poem a lot little pink dress im bookmarking right away
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fine take on the prompt...
so gracefully written...
All the best in the contest
love..
-Kiddy
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