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Graceful Madonna

Soft as clouds, so transparent
and Cloudy are thoughts
eclipsed my mind.
Singing and humming
my own song
walked alone on the road.
Though sure of the answer
sighed deep and smiled alone
wanted to ask myself,
“am I pretty?”

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    April 6, 2008

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    Your final line, the question ... Am I pretty really opens my eyes about the picture and makes me view it in a different way which is what I love bout poetry


    Thank you & Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


    • Kiddy
      April 7, 2008
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      Glad you liked my little poem...
      Thanks for bronze

      love
      -Kiddy