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[ breaking down ]

breaking down
I feel so tense
I've been so been damned
for my innocence

I only care
because thats how I am
living for my life

times have changed
now all I get from life
are the bleeding cuts
of love

society has changed me
or I suppose that
maybe I have let it
take apart my life

still I try to find
the things that I have lost
by digging with the knife.
into my skin so soft.

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