Yellow skin
pictured against silence
left of centre and far from loving arms
There's a glow
swept within the moment
from feathered rooftops
that hold her hands in place
and she takes her final bow
knowing she's already walked
a mile in her own shoes...
Author notes
Picture found at www.photobucket.com
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A contest entry
- Paying It Forward -Again- by Manda Kathryn.
450 points, ended April 6, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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lol...well done, my love, on the HM....
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I am speechless reading this, completely in love with this
"knowing she's already walked
a mile in her own shoes... "
♥
Thank you & Best of luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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Very well put, especially the ending. Your words are both descriptive and thoughtful. They add a depth to the picture I have to say I didn't see originally. Marvelous work!
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