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A little diddy of thanks




A mystical beauty so far away
Penning her muse in every way
Caring, so sweet she’ll always remain
Admired by many every single day

So I beg of you Deary, please do not go?
For what will you do with that talented soul?
Aimlessly pen… on white paper now?
You’ve got to be kiddin’~ I've forgotten how!!!

Thank you sweet friend for giving me light
Your poetry has visions of seeing past strife
Happiness should be your only plight
refresh your spirit so it may take flight





Author notes

Thank you ScarletO for just being you!

An inspirational and dear poetess of love, nature and life!
Okay so I haven’t written in awhile~ It shows, but I hope at least that you giggled and awwwww
(Lie to me) lol
See what happens when you go to paper and pencil??
And do this on a break at work!!!!!!!
Sorry that it doesn't really cut the mustard

Be well dear poetess!
Thank you ever so much for your sweet and humorous friendship!!
Many roses to you always!


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Comments


  • poppa
    September 14, 2008

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    A lovely dedication...poems from the heart always win in my books...
    congrats on the HM

    P.S whats wrong with using paper and pen ? long time ago thats all poets had and I still write that way


    • Lost Raindrops
      September 20, 2008
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      Hello Rob, How very sweet of you to say deary. Paper and pen? I really do not like the way my penmenship looks, so I am very thankful for the keyboard now
      Thank you for the comment
      Des


  • abuyi
    April 12, 2008
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    beautiful sonnet.. i am very happy to see it

    • Lost Raindrops
      April 26, 2008
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      Thank you Abdulla Zakir Ahmed for the HM and for honouring such a beautiful poetess!
      So sorry for the delay in my gratitude, have been traveling and computer withdrawl finally set in
      Thank you for your kindness!
      Des