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The Angel In Black

There he was,
An angel in black,
Tall and proud,
The son of Lucifer,
With long flowing hair,
The colour of fire,

I tried to look away,
But i found myself drowning,
Drowning in his deep, blue eyes,
And, as he spoke,
His words metled my cold heart,
It melted like butter on a warm summers day,
So this is what love is?

He took my heart and my soul,
My mind and my imagination,
He held me close,
He held me tight,
Our souls entwined,

Our hearts they joined,

Our spirits merged,

And, we became one.

 

Now we sit here,

Together forever,

Me and my lover,

The angel in black.

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For my dear Damien, with much love xxxxx

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  • Poemdancer
    August 10, 2008

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    'He held me close, he held me tight' vs. 'he held me close, her held me tight' Oh and great write, very interesting and strong, as well as vivid!

  • TNAdam
    May 20, 2008

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    cool

    savannah i made a shitty account to make this comment haha,aww how sweeet sav and damo 4 life
    im sorry if im ruining your cyber-reputation, Lol.