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hoping

im tired of waiting
just sitting around
im done expecting
something profound

i have tried to talk
but the conversation is never complete
i have tried to change things
yet everything still feels so off beat

im at a loss for a remedy
and its not like i havent tried
why cant you help me bring back
the way in you i used to confide

maybe im just wishing
for somethng that will never come about
its just i need your friendship
and of that i have no doubt

but if things dont change soon
i might have to slowly move along
from the hope that things will return
and for the journey ahead ill have to be strong

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  • dc4cutie
    April 16, 2008

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    this was.. just.. amazing. i loved the rhyming (I dont usually say this. lol) but this was wonderful. Yea. i know how you feel. The whole thing that you want your friend to be there for you, but they arent. lol (been there done that).

    this was absolutely wonderful (haha. ive run out of ways to say it. XD)
    but seriously,
    Great write!!

    Mel