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I Love You Daddy

A heart of gold,
that can't be bought or sold.
A wonderful man full of love,
was sent from up above.
To help us all,
catch us if we fall.
Spread love and joy to everyone,
their hearts he has won.
Love and peace is his mission,
for it is also his ambition.
A daddy to some and a friend to another,
He teaches us to help each other.

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I Love You Daddy
wrote for Spiritual Poet

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  • quack silver member
    April 18, 2008
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    this is really nice thanks for entering


  • Spiritual Poet gold member
    April 18, 2008

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    awwwwwwwwwwwww

    Thanks sweetie for this wonderful loving tribute. I do hope and aim to love everyone on here. I sure know im happy you asked me to be your daddy. God bless you sweetie, Daddy


  • lianonsidhe silver member
    April 5, 2008

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    Beautiful!
    I love the lines:
    'Love and peace is his mission,
    for it is also his ambition.'
    So often we look to computers and technology to save us, but it is love will win in the end because nothing can equal its power.


  • Angelflower
    April 4, 2008

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    This was such a good piece.I'm sure that dad will love it.. Great write..
    Peace to you,
    Jetleena


  • Lady Australis silver member
    April 4, 2008
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    this is gorguse n Rhymes sweetly
    goodluck and much love

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