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April Rain

Missing image
We ran hands joined
across teal wheat fields.
To our favorite stream
precious is our dream.

In awe gazing of mother's
beauty; flowers, lakes.
Caressed by desires
two souls on fire.

Soulful images of life
in each crystal drop.
Softly from an April sky
intention made us shy.

Blessed with heavens star
entwine in your kiss.
Patience the slow hand
feet fast; we ran.

Taking shelter; a red barn
our eyes locked then.
Like the rains of time
I knew you were mine.

Sultry showers gave birth
to love, unique florals.
Picking up your bouquet
we romanced our night away.

~~*~~

Sunset to sunrise
infinity held our souls.
Deep rooted passions
no longer untold.

I shall always

love

only

you!






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option #3 picture inspired

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  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    April 14, 2008

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    man mrs e
    this was a joint for sure
    lady my tory has a tough desicion
    to make i see oh my

    Good Luck


  • Brazos silver member
    April 7, 2008

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    Wet on the outside, soon to be wet on the inside. There is nothing like an April day spent with nature and you, my AP wife.

    "Sunset to sunrise
    infinity held our souls.
    Deep rooted passions
    no longer untold."

    I hope that old red barn had a tin roof on it, so we could here the music of the rain all night.

    I love you,
    Brazos


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    April 5, 2008

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    Stunning piece of writing here. I love this. Very very beautiful indeed. Wonderful flow of words here too. produces such imagery.

    Love
    Wayne Leon
    xx


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    April 4, 2008

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    Oh wow this is precious. I loved it. But contest states to put name in author notes..when you do let me know so i can put this in finalist list.
    good luck.

    Passions


  • AddictiveTRUTH
    April 4, 2008
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    Very romantic piece

    this is beautiful and sensual. Good luck to you Gmomma


  • Abson
    April 4, 2008

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    AN INSPIRING PIECE

    This is an inspiring piece of romantic poem.Good use of visuals did present a very picturesque on my mind as your reader.The rhyming is a bit off beat.Nevertheless your use of language did recreate a rendezvous for lovers and your unfeigned commitment to this person is so obvious.
    Thank you so much for taking the time to share with me on this forum.My regards and well wishes to you.

  • Acidanthra
    April 4, 2008

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    This was a very beautiful poem! The imagery and word usage was fantastic, and the photo was extremely sensual. The only criticism I would have to give this write is that the rhyming scheme began with a pattern, then it changed, throwing my flow of the read off balance. I feel that it could be revised to return balance. But other than that, I found this poem to be absolutely wonderful!! Great job, poet!

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