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Rounds Audition

 



1. Authors name:               Idle Mind Wondering

2. Age:                                   43

3. Genre of poetry:            Freeverse

(though, I like to push the boundaries
of old school restriction and form)

4. Collaborations:

 

Pamela A Lamppa            http://allpoetry.com/poem/3445186
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3332338
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3321294
delightfulmess                http://allpoetry.com/poem/3652758
Tattboyspet                       http://allpoetry.com/poem/3781243

And, presently,

I am working on one with markgrif

 

5. How many other round contests have you entered:

 

Several, I am holding one

and particapating in three at the moment (not counting this one)

and only once have I backed out.
 

6. How often are you on AllPoetry:  

 

Daily
 

7. who has been your inspiration to write:

 

Tolkien
Plath
Frost
 

8. Your likes:                       Finding the perfect set of words;

the ones where imagery, emotion

and understanding collide with intent. The same can be said about color and contrast.
 

9. Your dislikes:                  In the world: Mean people.

 

On Allpoerty: Unqualified and/or partial judges –

critics who need to hear

the sound of there own voice.
 

10. Why are you auditioning:

To be challenged beyond my comfort zone.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 I Am The Artist

 

 

 



I am two and I have a secret.
I am five and if I close my eyes
I am not really here.
I am ten and I hate you.
I am fifteen and I don’t care.
I am twenty-two

and scared;

so scared.


I’m thirty,
finally,
I understand what it means to breathe;
to tell the truth as people beside me
find acceptance and I experience freedom.


I stop burning pages of poetry.


At forty-three,

I look thirty and feel sixty;( ( I like looking thirty Embarassed  )

I have a well in depth of memory
and a universe of imagination

that guides my pen, heart and soul.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The Hitchhiker

 

 

 

 

 

The hills are stacked with city houses,
above and below,
as the road disappears through a tunnel.

Sound diminishes within hushed echoes.

It seems so much more
than a couple of years

since decidedly standing 
upon the on-ramp of escapement
from small-town views.

Now reaching the end
of this highway’s promise.

          <~>

She was old
and called Tennessee
her home;
I was new
on the road to nowhere.

She picked me up out of the night
and we drove on;
Her beauty was beyond me
like a best friend’s mother.

She was watching my shy glances
as we talked away the miles;
until her eyes held mine
and a confident hand
                        touched me.

Somewhere on the side
of a Pennsylvanian road
I forgot all about the
high school girls.

          <~>

What impresses me the most
is the limitless diversity of people
and their eager willingness
to befriend a stranger;
if a stranger is willing to be a friend.

          <~>

Trees fall hard on the edge
of the Rockies;
at least for the new kid,

only three days in logger’s camp comrade.

But a skidder rolled today,
tomorrow we’ll bury a veteran
and I feel like I’ve known these people
my whole life.

          <~>


Cultural and geographical changes
are superficial;
in the end we really are
all the same.

          <~>

Backpack in tow
I climbed aboard
with a simple man
who spent hours
trying to sell me the Bible.

Carefully, I listened,
because every soul has a story to tell.

He dropped me off
at love’s doorstep
in the Pacific Northwest.

I became a second rate cook
for a lousy waitress -
barely out of high school.

She was exotic
with eyes to mesmerize
And I became the fool,
a puppet waiting for strings.
But boy,
  could that girl dance,

may the bus boy
        have the best of luck.

          <~>

I could go home now
            if I thought I might belong.
But the road only goes one way.


It’s not very far, but long enough
and as day light heralds the tunnels end
I am granted a view of virgin landscape.
A vast valley
without a single man-made-structure
and I am tempted to believe
that this is all undiscovered;

if not for the road running through it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 She is my world

 

 

 Image by Pamela A Lamppa

 

 

 

 

may she always smile. 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

These rounds better be worth it! LMAO

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    April 21, 2008

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    oh this is such an intresting and unique audtion piece. the layout of it is perfect and organised and the background is gorgous and colurful. i love the best poem segment it truly captured me.


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    April 14, 2008

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    I agree with Delila, this was a very interesting audition and a pleasure to read! I loved your layout by the way and the background, I love colourfulness . The best poem was a wonderful one and your reason for taking up the challenge is admirable.

    Best of luck and thanks for entering the auditon


    • Idle Mind Wondering silver member
      April 14, 2008
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      thank you most kindly, I look forward to the challenge. And the Bg is my own digital painting, so thank you for noticing

      Ken


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    April 7, 2008
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    Good luck sweetie!


  • delightfulmess silver member
    April 5, 2008

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    Well I was so excited when I seen you entered.
    Oh what a pleasure this audition was.

    There is no doubt of your creativity, at least in my opinion. Love the poem you wrote describing yourself. How clever, and very moving.

    Also your favorite poem... Deserves a standing ovation!!!

    Ooooh and look at that precious baby of yours.
    She is beautiful.

    Best of luck in the rounds to come.


    Delila

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