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Funeral

Oh , my love
Your eyes
Those days
Brought me happiness and joy

Today however, i was forced
to close
Your eye lids … forever
Had to close those
lips that had always
brought a smile upon my face…

And those red rosy cheeks
that I remember so well
have colored with
white

Your warm hands
that I've touched
have now become cold

Today …
is your funeral day…

The one question
that runs through my mind
"Why must I be the one to bury you
on this not so perfect day…"

Author notes

back to playing mmorpgs for me @.@ got nothing else to do...
sidenote: Jenny if you want to know how to level real fast in FlyFF message me and ill give you a guide (it tells you how to get 2 flyffs on same time so you can use assist to buff and heal while training main character *its not hacks so you wont get banned*)

Help me fix the errors!... but other then that all other comments are welcome ~

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  • Sle3p
    June 16, 2008

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    eh, i cant tell you howmany times i've read this. Almost everyday i'm at a computer i assure you...everytime i do i fall deeper...*puts my head down* deeper...ugh nvm


  • VampyEyes
    April 6, 2008
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    er okay then.


  • Critical Jive
    April 3, 2008
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    err jenny i should also mention that its not hacks... so you wont get banned... haha XP