Picture's perfection
drifted
living in the beauty
of loving,
flaws.
Author notes
10words
picture is prompt ~ by Jack Terry
A contest entry
- yet another quickie.. by Lavender Butterfly.
420 points, ended April 3, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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YAY!!! I realy like this one, "Living in the beauty of loving flaws" It's very beautiful and yet amazingly like... amazing. lol It means so much. Um yeah... so honestly I just woke up like super soon ago... and I feel like crap... but yeah... i hope you understand this comment. That's alll I can say
hehe it's like life and people and whatnot. you always win these quickie things. I always lose them... that's why I never enter them anymore. Teach me how to win them
Alex
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Congrats on the bronze!! This write was beautiful and well worth a trophy!
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How deeply engaging and such a grasping take... x Thanks so much for sharing and many blessings to you too... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.
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oh this is perfect.
EXcellent take on the pic.
Delila
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This has so much length in so few words. It certainly is soothing. It made me smile. Good luck.
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Beautiful...very mild and soothing and brings the picture to life!! Excellent wording!
good luck!
pri
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hey little cat this is an interesting write from you...
living in the beauty
of loving,
flaws.
Give me an explanation of the final thought
Me -
Wonderful! You have such a way with words!
Best of luck.
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thanks veyr much
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Hello.
Thank you for your comment on my piece "Painted Snapshot".
Your poem speaks to me. I can just feel the energy. The ending was unexpected. With an unexpected closure, it makes the reader want to read more. Either that, or reread it until it spits out something else. Whichever you prefer.
Good luck to you.
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Oh wow. So very deep. Nicely done here, and again with your perfect word placement/emphasis. Great!!!
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