Rusting..

Summer snow
smoldering in memoirs
bound in victorian laughters

~rusted~

A contest entry

yet another quickie.. by Lavender Butterfly. 420 points, ended April 3, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Acidanthra
April 3, 2008
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I loved the phrase, "summer snow". Very creative! Great job, poet! Congrats on the silver!
- phoenixonfire
  April 3, 2008
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  Thanks for the comment!
User Unknown
April 3, 2008

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Hello.

Thank you for your comment on "Painted Snapshot." I have been getting numerous comments on the piece, and I am very flattered. Thank you so much.

I am surprised by this poem's quality. This brings me to a whole new viewing of the painting that was presented. You go into a vivid and descriptive style with your emotions. It sets the poem off like wild fire. You are clear and sincere with your thoughts. The last word was truly telling. "Rusted" can be viewed in so many ways.

Good luck in the contest.

User Unknown
- phoenixonfire
  April 3, 2008
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  Thanks for such an insightful comment!
Lavender Butterfly
April 3, 2008

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How beautifully enchanting... x Thanks so much for sharing and many blessings to you... x Lavender Butterfly.
- phoenixonfire
  April 3, 2008
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  Thanks
Unsigned
April 3, 2008
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really good write...

Simon
- phoenixonfire
  April 3, 2008
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  Thanks
luna-midnight
April 3, 2008
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aww wow! beautiful write
great write
and goodlcuk
take care
stepahnei =)
- phoenixonfire
  April 3, 2008
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  Thanks