My life is a residue
of your imperfections
painted correctly.
Author notes
I wrote this from the picture with the contest. Hope you like. I really tried.
A contest entry
- yet another quickie.. by Lavender Butterfly.
420 points, ended April 3, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow... such a small poem yet the impact that it has is just amazing... Well done..
Peace to you,
Jetleena
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this very deep and just beautifully penned. congrats on the nice shiny gold trophy it was well deserved!
NineTailedFox -
Oooh, I love this! This is definitely a great perception of the picture. Great job, poet!
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WOW!! This is so creative and brings so many emotions to life...there is so simplicity yet a hidden elegance is so pure and wonderfuL! This looks like a winner for me!
good luck
pri
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wow this is really deep and completely outside of the box... well penned fine poet and many blessings to you... x Lavender Butterfly.
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really good write...
Simon -
awww wow! i love this. it's so beautiful, and i see that in the propt
wonderful and good luck
take care
stephanie =)
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