Fan the fire,
Light the Kerosene,
All to find
Momentary relief.
Everything disintegrates,
Slowly, as you watch the...
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Option 1 (Flames)
A contest entry
- Options!! :) by poetrytoopeneyes.
520 points, ended April 13, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I loved it... it was a very well written peice! I really enjoyed watching you write it!!!!
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This is very good, I especially like how you left the last line trail off so you didn't flat out repeat flames. Good luck in the contest!
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Thank you
I had a lot of fun trying to do this one. ^_^ -
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That's great!
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