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I don't care

I don't care
I don't mind
it don't bother me
I'm still alive

rest in peace
rot in hell
just as well
see you soon

I've watched death,
saw a soul slip trough my finger tips,
lost my own to cherry red lips,
and I don't give a shit anymore

so many eulogies,
and life becomes a morgue
so many eulogies,
and I'm getting bored

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  • know one
    April 3, 2008
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    awesome rhyme in this one I like the consepts you used got me thinking....great write!!!