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folks, let's

write a poem for gathering neighborhood
knowing you won't be alone
on relaxing porch at end of day,
have imagery for those wanting to close eyes
and be revived in audience
without sad exhaustion at sunset
because auricle is an eye now

set tone as font
more than glaring highway letters
only leaving

give a stanza as a turn of the head
to those welcome, mature and silly
stimulated to ripe wit
or intermingle closely between lines
mentioning no agitation for age
or ignorance of daughter's words
get your butt off the road
when it can be brought up to a flower
or family for no excuses

doesn't need to sneak but smile with both of them


feel temperature of twilight deeply as redolence
and a dance as a stomp that is hard as missed person
to join

have fun for community...
make a background of not wanting to quit realistic
enable bonding thoughts
and don't launch from myth
but your mouth with time
and treasure of human interval that is life

Author notes

for you through door :
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I'm not sure how to credit that, except maybe one of my googled searches mother baby... and yes indeed everybody for prelude~


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  • voices
    April 19, 2008
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    thanks. as always, your use of language is remarkable.
    i appreciate it.


    • Bams
      April 23, 2008
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      worth stirring not just from me but stem...

      Voices ricochets

      with something effectively reminiscent of poetry publications or Hall and Oats album for old examples of personality perhaps, I'm sorry I disappointed to a degree around your username

      wouldn't mind being tuned in to alternate judge here,
      babies are my subject