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Sonnet #1

To me my love you are divine 
I just know that we are meant to be 
Your scent like the Roses so fine   
O’ how my heart truly misses thee   
For as you walk away, for you to stay I plea 
Your beauty more vast than the oceans wide 
A song I play, will you dance with me 
Your heart cold, you turn like the tide 
Will you not hear my love, please abide 
But as you walk away I hear you say 
When I am young and never die   
So with these words, your beauty know no decay 
And with others eyes, your life will remain 
So now may your love I attain?   

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  • Liquid memories
    April 9, 2008

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    such soft caring words of love, requesting to received love inreturn. very nice. true the young thinks they will never die, but soon realize that is not the case. thank you for sharing.


  • Alastair
    April 4, 2008

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    Of course...

    ...You may attain my love for thou hast had it in thy hands since the day thine eyes rested upon me.