Past the time
I could have turned back
The few words you actually spoke to me
Cut deep
Deep into my soul
Left in your settling dust
As you left my soul
That little spot you held
In my heart
Has just caved in
Has just been filled by the rest of me
The rest of my evils
How could I still laugh with joy?
Perhaps the little strand of sanity
Has at last been severed
At last...
Author notes
Just a bit of a Quickie, but i still like it
A contest entry
- PIF Contest - "Gasping" by CarolDesjarlais.
900 points, ended April 5, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Read and Comment PLZ!
Comments
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Oh a dark write...but one can feel this way when they have been hurt. Thank you for entering.
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Good one
This is very well done! Wonderfully conceived and brilliantly executed! The final end was perfect There was no errors. No typos. nothing to change. I look forward to your next write
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