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Fading Fast

Turbulent minds descending,
forlorn with pressure;
Fighting, blocking,
controlling the everlasting
organism to my faith.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    June 22, 2008
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    I like this, it just has the right flow and a great choice of wording.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    April 3, 2008

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    I like this very much thank you for taking the time to enter my contest have a great evening best wishes and much love


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    April 3, 2008
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    Nice take sis!