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Cool Breeze

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cloaked with mystique

you move sensuously,
smoothly up and down
my clammy perception

tantalizing the surface
of my fervency with nip
over gentle mounts like

a lover emanicipating

a cool lingering effect 

 

 

 

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  • tawk gold member
    April 4, 2008

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    Wow so sensual and full of amazing imagery! Wow leaves one breathless. Niaish for sharing my friend. I so enjoyed reading this morning Theresa


  • Providence
    April 4, 2008

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    Nature in its most intimate form. In just a few short stanzas this piece draws the reader in.

    Wonderfully written.

    Marianne


  • Hummingbirdlove
    April 4, 2008
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    Beautiful

    I can relate to the feeling and just by reading feel it again.

  • tara wilson gold member
    April 3, 2008

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    fantasy, nature, & SENSUAL.. I might add onto the category of this beautiful poem....so lovely.....