I will remember you in the falling rain
In our laughter or in our pain
In the sunsets that we shared
For all the times that we cared
When we experienced the mountains so majestic
Or sadly, the things we neglected
When we lay observing the falling leaves
Or just relaxed in times of ease
All the meals you lovingly cooked
Or when you moved me with that special look
When I gazed in your eyes that are so enchanting
Or lost our cool and were raving and ranting
I'll always remember the day we met
Anticipating what awaited for us yet
When we loved without reservation
Or the times we couldn't keep our patience
Or the the many travels that we took
and the promises we forsook
or when we gave each other so much more
And so deeply loved to the core
Whether we can continue or can't go any further
These thing and more I will always remember
To experience so much joy and love together
Will live in my heart now and forever
Please tell me what you think
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wow - this is a great and emotional write i love how you've split it up to the before and after
it really shows your sadness and emotion for this
I'll always remember the day we met
Anticipating what awaited for us yet
I can relate to tht as that moment should never leave our minds
well done, good luck and thanks for entering
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Thank you for your f-a-s-t response to this entry. I was moved by it with compassion as I've been there. I wrote this to my present girlfriend a few months ago and it actually served to turn things around for us. I recently wrote: "That is Our Love" to mark the evolution in our relationship. Anyway, good luck to you both and may things work to the best. Albert.
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