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A Life in Camouflage

I will enrich myself in camouflage

so that the beasts will not catch me

I will hide from your sinful words

Maybe then I can escape reality

And bury my findings in ancient sands

Where love can hold your bearings

And swallow mouthfuls of solitude

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  • Touchof1der silver member
    April 14, 2008
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    Cleverness of thought abounds, propelled by overwhelming emotion that zooms out, ready to explode on impact. Thank you for sharing and best wishes to you in all of your endeavors. Keep that pen handy and ever ready for use dear poet. Good luck in the contest!
    ♥ Touchof1der


  • shannon.green
    April 3, 2008

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    Nice Job

    We all sometimes need to be hidden huh? And escape the world around us. And just to escape to love. I loved your poem. Beautiful job.
    Shannon