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Crank Dat Razor Blade

yeah i dont superman, i dont rosevelt, i jus crank that razor blade...

That blood,
it drips...
As my forearm
skin rips


That pain
disappears...
The kiss of
death nears


Cut my flesh
with a blade...
Everytime my
sorrows fade

Cant help but
to cry...
Deep down
i wanna die


But till
my time...
I'll commit
this "crime"


For i'm
jus alone...
Im a person
all disown


To my body
i'll bring gore...
To my family
im jus a whore


Take this
time to breathe...
still alive
with this need







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My name is Georgia, but everyone calls me "Gore" cause I LOVE GORE!!!

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  • Echos in Silence
    January 12
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    i very nice write, with a smooth rhythm and well written stanzas....keep writing!


  • Andiness
    January 12

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    I've done a couple cutter poems as well, but this is pretty good, though the rhythym (I think that's the right word) is a little messed up in places.


  • Dark Otter
    January 12

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    I've done a few cutter poems!

    I like your style. The practice is dangerous, but writing about it is an honest release. You relate your emotions and state of self esteem quite well in this piece. If we could only bring that intensity to our lives in some other way!


  • xDisasterous Angelx
    June 4, 2008
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    totally amazing... very good work.. keep it up.


  • vampire.lust.death
    May 23, 2008

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    crank heheheh

    hehehehehehe crank hehehe makes wanna rap it almost but its also deep i love the useage is fantastic


  • xxtainted-faeriexx
    May 22, 2008

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    Really, I dont like this poem, to me it almost seems like you are amking fun of cutting. Maybe thats not the way you meant it, but thats how it sounded to mee...


  • Hidden
    May 22, 2008

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    so cool! i really dont approve of cuting, but the detail in it is so fasinatining. REALLY GOOD WRITE!


  • The Otep
    May 21, 2008

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    Wow..that is awesome!! Emotions are so raw and so is this writing...greatness!!!
    Gore-what any awesome thing to write about as well

  • fillurhands
    May 21, 2008

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    Very Powerful and so painful and I don't mean the cutting - I mean the emotion here. This is the best part.
    Cut my flesh
    with a blade...
    Everytime my
    sorrows fade
    If you are really cutting, please stop. You are worthy of anything and everthing. Don't let others run you down. Be your own hero.


  • The Great Disaster
    May 21, 2008

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    This is really good. I love it. It makes cutting sort of beautiful and the rhyming and flow is wonderful. My favorite part is:
    "That pain
    disappears...
    The kiss of
    death nears"


  • lucy 107
    May 2, 2008
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    awsome

    i liked this poeam


  • Nicotine Eyes
    April 7, 2008
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    Sry, deleting contest. It failed.


  • Comic Book Romance gold member
    April 3, 2008
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    Gore!!

    i love this!
    it kicks ass
    good lucky baby girl!

  • Nicotine Eyes
    April 3, 2008
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    What is ur AP username? Nice job here, Thanks.

    BabyLove--x

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