princes can't compare
with some simple praises and
your meaningful touch.
Author notes
In retrospect, this is a pretty depressing poem.
Written Mar. 16
A contest entry
- Poetic Form Options Contest by Aerden.
600 points, ended April 8, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Traditional Haiku & Senryu by liquidmindforever.
800 points, ended May 3, 2008, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Est-ce que ça te dit?
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Honorably Mentioned
The memory might be depressing, but the poem itself is exquisite in its simplicity. Thank you so much for submitting it! -
Hey, now! You're not supposed to diss your own poem!
I enjoyed it--very simple and eloquent. Best of luck in the contest!
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Well, the guy I wrote it about dumped me a month ago, so that's what the AN was referencing...
Thanks though. ^^
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