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maybe they will understand...

I want to pull out the knife
I have this need to end my life

If I could just put the gun to my head
Bang! I'd be dead

Cant you see me hang from this rope
Apparently I lost all hope

I have already took too many pills
And forgotten how it was to feel

Maybe now you'll start to care
I understand, life's not fair

Im starting to black out
Finally, im on my way out...

Please tell me what you think

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  • know one
    April 5, 2008

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    Awesome

    a minor grammer erro in there that could be fixed some of it I found a little cleche but over all it was great
    it has awesome rhyme and flow!


  • rainbow emo
    April 3, 2008
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    red x tears

    it was good. i liked how everyhting rhymed. love ur poem