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shakes and murmurs

It becomes an attack of the winter gods, then.
Or at least a rampage of sleet and slip.
When from my mouth humidity billowed,
and seventeen ice-picks strung across fascia.

A wish that mother had worked overtime
to add a second ply on Christmas quilt.


Procrastination wreaks revenge on kindling,
so mucked with damp, casualty of no canvas.
Gas stove sputters to heat the snow gathered,
a habit since fifth pipe split kidneys.

 

The stench of jams and butter biscuits

still haunt the pantry stocked with nostalgia.

Next to door-frame are the etched stencils

of all three children's advancement of height.

Three weeks until four week anniversary

of finding all three, in rigid silent slumbers.

 

A wasted fortune to invest in that catalogue,

promising Alaskan log pipe-dream heaven.

 

My father always said, "When hell freezes over."

 

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  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    April 21, 2008

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    You have handled the contest prompt very well. Some great imagery with light humor lacing a dark moment.
    Interesting descriptions.

    Best of luck in the judging. ~Pamela


  • Cat10
    April 20, 2008

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    this was a great poem! you did a really nice job with it!! good luck in all of your contests!


  • j-ay rose
    April 6, 2008
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    damnit! that was supposed to be clappy hands.


  • j-ay rose
    April 6, 2008

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    this is awe and admiration. idk ever know what to say most of the time & i feel like spaz saying 'i like this!!!1' all the time.


  • individuality gold member
    April 3, 2008

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    a good peice of poetry, good imagery used, both light and dark that helped the heavy atmosphere. good luck in the contest.

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