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Immortally Yours Audition

    * Segment one: question and answer time

My Authors name is Immortally Yours aka Chantelle DeJong

My Age is 25

My Genre of poetry is Dark, Erotica, Morbid Erotica, Love, Fantasy, etc

My Collaborations was one Collaboration with an ex AP lover

I have entered only one or two other rounds contests

I am on AllPoetry at least half a day every day

I write how I feel and I feel when I write. That is mostly my inspiration.

Likes
*Poetry
*Taking pictures
*The surrounding walls of my house
*Myspace
*Vampirefreaks
*Random people
*Being Random
*kids
*Eye liner
*Goofy Friends
*Emo Boys
*Dancing @ The Club
*Proving Ppl Wrong (can't help that)
*Traveling
*Reading
*Charmed
*Wicca
*Harry Potter
*Local Concerts
*Sudoku
*Swimming
*Fishing
*Hiking
*Camping
*Tans
*Movies
*Cuddling

Dislikes
*Trouble makers and back-stabbers
*Drama queens
*Going places
*Br0k3n promises
*Empty promises
*Snakes
*Tomatoes
*Octopus (long story)
*Flying
*Car Accidents
*Vaseline
*The Feel Of Butter
*Slow Computers
*Fakes
*Spinich

I am auditioning because I want to expand myself to another way of writing. I am so used to just a few different styles. I have a serious case of writers block and I am hoping that this will help me get my muse back. I love to write, I love to show, and I love to make people feel. I want to experience a difference in my every day ordinary self.

    * Segment two: Describe yourself

There is a side to me
that no one will ever understand
I choose the darkness
and it's every demand
The thickness in light
overturns my life
And when times get rough
I turn to the knife
No one has to notice
or even really care
I know I'm not much
but it's only my despair

I work really hard
to fit in and belong
I get knocked down every time
but still I stand here strong
I am but a no body
and maybe that's my fault
But no matter the situation
I want to bring it to a halt
I am of a free spirit
trying to move ahead
I am bull-headed and stubborn
but still the tears I shed

    * Segment three: We challenge you to show us your best

Engraved Dignity

Ashamed of what she has become,
she has now engraved her title
to her loving spots of hell.

A lost and dangerous soul,
once a pretty little angel
searching for more.

She marks her promises with blood,
hoping to one day feel more
than just the pain.

Her body has been taken for granted,
a treasure chest now violated
leaving her motionless.

Again she marks her territory,
leaving a newer scar;
SLUT!

© Chantelle DeJong, All rights reserved

Author notes

Hope you guys all enjoy this ... I tried my best ... Did I do okay? lol

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    April 21, 2008

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    this is a beautiful write and you like some of the things that I like. its always ufn getting to know people more. a great descriptive piece and the poem is intense and deep


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    April 14, 2008
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    You like a lot of things that I like Aunty, which makes us even more understandable... Harry Potter and Charmed and taking pictures and, yeah. I like a lot of that stuff too.

    Great description of yourself and the poem is very intense and interesting. Good luck and thanks for the great audition!


  • delightfulmess silver member
    April 5, 2008

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    Thank you for introducing us to the you.

    Love the dark side of things myself from time to time
    But from the times we have talked you struck me a bit brighter. I was suprised here. Please dont take that the wrong way. Just goes to show how little I pay attention

    Great audition and best of luck in comp.


    Delila