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Independance Day

We the people of the U.S.A.
stole it from the Indians historians say
they threw out the british
who had helped them in their task
got their independance
what more could they ask
since then every independance
movement in the world today
is put down directly or indirectly
by the C.I.A
Except for Chavez and our Fidel
Who told the C.I.A. to go to hell

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  • upperworld06
    August 19, 2008
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    lol, i like this a lot. funny yet true, good job and good luck.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    June 28, 2008

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    lol

    this is right on the nose as they quote from someone to make their points...very nice entry thank you and
    good luck


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 15, 2008
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    10 words... x


  • Emile
    April 5, 2008
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    Very Good

    Well said, this is a testament to your intellect as well as your sensitive heart and caring soul. This flows well and the short abrupt phrasing works well to chop this piece up into succulent slices of reality. Your use of simple words and ideas are easy to digest and strike a common cord of familiarity.


  • buffsab99
    April 3, 2008
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    Excellent

    Excellent view on the prompt. good luck in the contest

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