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Sorry I couldn't be perfect.

I'm not a perfect man,
never have been
and I never will be.
I'm not the strongest man
someone to pull you up
one thousand feet,
but I can lift you up
when you fall on hard times.
I can't hold off all your enemies
but when it gets cold
I can hold you in my arms.
I can't give you
everything in this world
but I can give you my heart and soul.
So I'm sorry I couldn't be perfect.

Author notes

This is inspired by the song. It's not the litteral meaning of it but it's my interpretation.

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  • RainbowGirl257
    May 2, 2008

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    wow, i love this poem. it kind of reminds me of twilight, and the two main characters. I like how you related back to the word perfect. thanks for entering and good luck.


    • Ashe Nyte
      May 2, 2008
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      OMFG I love that series. It's such a good story and I can't wait for book four to come out.