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The Echoing Shore

A morning wake's,
a tiny peek behind blue clouds.

Footsteps,
              that imprint,

and fill with feelings, as one goes.

A memory deep within my mind's cavern
as I see her walk

                  along the shoreline.

Her mind, an hourglass,


sifting

          through the                  ocean's tides

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  • PerfectImperfection
    April 11, 2008

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    A scattered piece of revelry and wondering thought. Nice use of imagery in few words. Thank you so much for your entry!


  • peridotPixi
    April 3, 2008
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    i really like the words and the decription you have put into this poem, i really didnt even have to look at the picture to understand what you were talking about great imaginary, and also i love how its not alighned it kinda gives it the flow of water, good luck in the contest and keep writing, -Amy