A morning wake's,
a tiny peek behind blue clouds.
Footsteps,
that imprint,
and fill with feelings, as one goes.
A memory deep within my mind's cavern
as I see her walk
along the shoreline.
Her mind, an hourglass,
sifting
through the ocean's tides
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Art Inspiration!!!! by PerfectImperfection.
687 points, ended April 11, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A scattered piece of revelry and wondering thought. Nice use of imagery in few words. Thank you so much for your entry!


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i really like the words and the decription you have put into this poem, i really didnt even have to look at the picture to understand what you were talking about great imaginary, and also i love how its not alighned it kinda gives it the flow of water, good luck in the contest and keep writing, -Amy



