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Doll

Hello Doll, I have to say
I thought about forgiving today
Then I remembered just what you did
The fact that you ran away and hid
You told them all to keep it silent
Telling lies or getting violent
Then looked at me and begged me no
"Please, Oh please! You can't just go!"
Yes I can and yes I will
I just jumped from the window sill
Enjoy the slap
I meant it all
How dare you laugh
And make me fall.
The ground is hard though I'm soft
Time was short, and now I'm gone.
I'll sit and stare and think awhile
Maybe even (one day) smile.
Goodbye Doll
Enjoy your run
One of these days, I'll end your fun.

Author notes

I'm a little angry at someone. I thought about their "I'm soory!"s but they don't seem real.

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  • toomysterious
    April 24, 2008
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    Sounds more like revenge to me. Pretty good though.