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Time

Tick tock goes the clock such an annoying sound.
It makes me want to scream why as it ticks around.
Making so much noise its ticking in my brain.
Except now time stopped since I took the batteries.

is it any good please comment so i know

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  • Keystone Theater
    April 7, 2008

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    LOL, and who said no man can stop time? This was cute, but if you wake up late because the alarm didn't go off you have yourself to blame!


  • Semper-Fi Juggalette
    April 3, 2008
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    it makes since
    the sound stops
    when the batteries
    are gone XD


  • Juggalo-King
    April 3, 2008
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    I like it


  • Ace13
    April 3, 2008
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    I really like this one...such a simple subject and I really like the rhym scheme.