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FOREVER~Upon a time

                                 ART by;T.C. Chiu

 

Dragons,Castles and yes, Unicorns

the ~Wizard  puts words so well

upon this young innocent maiden

this paints a story to a "Fairytale"

 

 

A Prince rides this way many times

just stay there, you too ...Shall see!

For he is already in wait close bye

from a trunk of the "Old Oak tree"

 

 

'Oh yes my dear beauty, prick a rose

forever you will reside in a fairytale

to it's wonders beyond your dreams

and the love I'll cast upon this spell

 

Author notes

Picture Inspired - Maiden by T.C. Chiu
http://www.allposters.com/-sp/Maiden-Posters_i2840502_.htm

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  • almostgone
    April 4, 2008

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    A very inspiring piece you have written. Love itself is very much a fairytale. Great job on the HM! Cheers!


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    April 4, 2008

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    A very beautiful tale you have woven with this picture.Lovely in=magery inded. Thanks so much for your entry
    gaylene


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    April 3, 2008

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    Very beautiful imagery and story
    you have written here my friend!
    I think that you nailed this one
    and I am sure that you will do well
    with it in this contest! Good luck
    and thanks a lot for sharing it here!




    Jeremy0826


  • azlyn gold member
    April 3, 2008
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    Breathtaking beauty!!!!! The words are just magical...and your background and pic....oh my! I just want to read this again and again!!!! And I think I will!!! Very pleasurable read....I truly loved every second of it! Thank you for sharing....if you have many more such as this I would love links to them. Thanks again....

    Az


  • grannyeri gold member
    April 3, 2008

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    What a lovely presentation you have created on this page - very medieval looking. Liked the poem as well - three verses about the picture - aren't unicorns special?

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