I dream of having someone
To stand beside me when the day is done.
A man to never mind the silly things I do,
Someone on earth for me to belong to.
I dream of my own little corner of Heaven on earth,
A place that is not made up of money or worth.
But one that is made of love and kindness...
My own world of 'marital bliss'.
I dream of someone that really knows me,
And can tell when I need someone, because I'm lonely.
Someone that can tell me it will be okay
When the things in life don't go my way.
Someone that will walk beside me each day
And help me find the words to say
To tell of the God that we both love,
And of the love He sent from above.
A contest entry
- LOVE IS IN THE AIR.......LET YOUR LOVE HEART SHINE! BIG POINTS!!!!! by ears2hearyou.
1200 points, ended April 11, 2008, 19 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Very good
Someone that will walk beside me each day
And help me find the words to say
To tell of the God that we both love,
And of the love He sent from above.
Like the ending words
All very nice
Rick
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hey,i know the fealing of longing for some one.i can relate,the fealings in this really show,dont give up he is there and probaly under your nose.
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omg!! This is so pretty! i really love it! Congrats
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Awww
To bad you're so young because I would
marry you myself. This was most enchanting.
The love and affection of your words burst
through with warmth and power. I wanted to
give you the biggest hug after reading this
exquisite write. My advice to you is to never
allow life to change you. Don't become callous
or hard as you get older and experience the
bumps and bruises of life. Excellent!
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nice
BEATIFUL POEM. I REALLY AGREE WITH YOU TOO. THE WORLD SHOULDN'T BE ABOUT MONEY OR WORTH. THE WORLD SHOULD BE ABOUT LOVE AND KNOWING THAT YOU HAVE SOMEONE EHO YOU CAN COUNT ON. I KNOW THST I KNOW NOTHING ABOUT LOVE AND HAVING SOMEONE BUT THANKS TO OU I WILL KNOW KNOW. YOUR POEM IS REALLY TOUCHING AND IT CAN HELP A LOT OF PEOPLE OUT THEIR WHO IS HAVING TROUBLE FINDING LOVE AND
WHO IS LEFT OUT THEIR LONELY. NOT HAVING ANY ONE TO SAY THEY LOVE. YOU CAN REALLY WRITE LOVE POEMS. I WHICH EVERY ONE ON ALLPOETRY WOULD WRITE POEMS LIKE YOU. WELL...THAT INCLUDES ME. AS I SAID I DON'T KNOW ABSOLUTLEY NOTHING ABOUT LOVE. THIS POEM WAS PURE GENIUS. AND THANKS AGAIN FR WRITING. NEVER STOP WRITING. BRAVO JOB! -
This is so heartfelt, it is as if your emotions are perfectly placed from mind to papper. Don't give up, dreams come true I longed for a husband like that, and Now I have one. well deserved gold.
God Bless.
Arrianna -
This was so beautiful.. I really enjoyed this piece... The image that you created was sad but still great.. And the emotion behind it was beautiful.. Great write.
Peace to you,
Jetleena
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He's there, waiting just around the corner.Hurry, you don't want to miss him.A lovely poem, Ros
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