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He Can't See Into My Eyes

When I look into his eyes
I know he cries
Cries when he can’t sleep
Cries like he is beat

But does he know
How I feel
And that I
Think this is real
Does he know what
I can’t live without
Can he tell you he has no doubt

Behind his eyes
Hi tries to hide
From the pain we feel inside
Does he know I can see
How he fells about me
Does he know I can tell
He thinks we’re going to hell
If I can see the hand he is dealt
He can tell
What I felt

So when he looks at me
I must withhold from his sight
So he doesn’t know
What’s deep inside
By looking into my eyes

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  • albinoblacksheep720
    December 12, 2008
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    Nice

    I like it. Nice rhyme, and flow. I like the way you capture Bella in here. Nice job. Good luck