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A Life In Camouflage

Young glistening skin lays so peacefully,
While her bold green eyes are lite with fire.
Parties like downstairs were wasting her time,
According to the guest she was nowhere to be found.

Cars flew by as she skipped gracefully down the road,
Bodies walked past as if she didn't exsist in this world.
Being ignored isn't very exciting when you want to matter,
There's no emotion in this ladys' camouflage lifetime.



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  • NeonRose
    April 18, 2008
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    This is very mysterious..makes me think a lot. good use of the prompt.


  • Touchof1der silver member
    April 14, 2008

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    Oh my... this was well done by all means. One heck of a piece my friend. Great job and best wishes to you in all of your endeavors. Thank you for sharing. Keep that pen handy and ever ready for use dear poet. Good luck in the contest!
    ♥ Touchof1der