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Dear God

Please walk with me down life's road
And show me all I need to do.
Grant me this wish, my God,
For all I want is You.

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  • grm
    April 3, 2008

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    though i'm not a big fan of religious poetry, i admit this piece serves as well as any in regards such writing.
    simple and earnest

    thanks for entering


  • Nicolette gold member
    April 3, 2008

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    This is almost like a conversation with God.. but then that is what a prayer is; this is just a written prayer.

    I so liked the innocence and sincerity of your voice here...i'm sure God will smile on this letter. And there's not even one adjective here. Nicely done!

    Thank you for this entry.

    ~ Nicolette