Enumeration of the times
I crept and grieved in silence
and fear of your awakening...
like incisions that forever scarred.
Author notes
20 words exactly
Prompt: http://tyt2000.deviantart.com/art/Freedom-19490162
Abuse stays with you forever.
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF ~ Pic Prompt ~ 20 words by nothinghere.
650 points, ended April 4, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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the image i picked myself and forgot at firsdt it was an image prompt worked much better with this lol -
They say you have to feel the words. I think I just caressed some fine ones. Still it is sad that this subject must be written about. For it only grows in silence.
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Wonderful Sis!!! Felt the soul of this deeply!!!
Love You~
Az
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Very powerful and well thought out.
I hope that you do well with this piece.
Well done and good luck to you here!
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It does indeed. Abuse is something that never goes away. That is why it must be stopped before it can begin. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a definite gold winner in my book hun. I bow in awe at your amazing talent. This is phenomenal and I mean that. That first stanza just reaches out and grabs you from the get-go. Marvelous imagery and the pace of the poem slinks through gracefully. Such a creative display you have offered here.
♥ Touchof1der
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Good take on the picture..just right fo r it..
All the best!
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Ok so, I can't relate personally to this one but I sure can feel what's going on...and I can give you a hug.
Paul
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Just checked what the contest asked for and it doesn't surprise me that this is where your mind went
You have used a stunning picture here
suffice to say that you have done a superb job here my friend
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I know this feeling well... this is such a sad and brutal take on the prompt.. but powerful and something many can relate to! Great write!
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