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Sunset Dreams

As I watch the sun set

subtle memories of you grace my dreams

like an eerie mist swiftly overtaking my every thought

bringing our kindred hearts together

 

Then as twilight has fallen
you once again commandeer my heart
you invade my dreams
and kindle my desire

as your essence fills my senses
you take me in your arms and
whisper of your love for me

you silence my pounding heart

Be merciful as you
withhold not yourself from me
but fill me with a bliss I can only have from loving you

graze upon my love, soothing your spirit

 

My love is irrevocable

I give it to you fully and openly

not a trickling of poison 

for it is not wrongful for me to love you 

 

By godspeed you have you have pulled me from the jagged edge

to give me a life of love, honor, respect, loyalty, devotion and passion

yes at sunset I dream

of a life with you. 

 

 

 

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wildfiredreamer

used all words from option A with the option B title of sunset dreams

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  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    June 4, 2008
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    You did an excellent job with this I see you have written this from a word bank.
    A tough write I have done some myself I know how hard it is, but you did a good job handled the words very smoothly.
    Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.

  • star wars fanatic
    June 1, 2008

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    Very beautifully written. I felt the longing, but it was subtle, which is the way I prefer romance poems to be written. Excellently done, and thx for entering and your patience in judging.


  • Stickboy gold member
    April 24, 2008
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    awwwwwwwwwww this is beautiful best of luck in contest my friend