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Hands For Hire

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The touch of your hand
the warmth of your fingers,
the smell of the oil
how the memory lingers.

The strength of your touch
on just the right place,
the pleasure it gave
bought a smile to my face.

Sweet lubrication
as there on the bed
all the stress and worry
flew out of my head.

Relief from the pain
was a joy to behold,
muscles relaxed
and no longer cold.

With those hands for hire
and love in your heart,
a gift to the world
as you use your art.
 
With those magic fingers
your touch from the start,
the memory still lingers
you massaged my heart. 
 
 
 
 
 
 

 

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Thank you Juan, this is for you!

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  • Purrsanthema
    November 4
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    A sumptuous poem for a sumptuous image!


    • Sue Cardwell gold member
      November 4
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      And the massage he gave was fantastic ... his hands have a very healing touch ... Sue


  • kareneisenlord gold member
    October 29

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    A good masseuse is truly a blessing to those who receive the benefits and healing from it. This write is tastefully sensual and certainly portrays the power of the hands through a great massage! I know that I could use one. lol Best wishes to you.

  • where can I find this Juan...lol...good write...

  • What a talent you have! This is absolutely amazing. The flow and rhyme was spectacular. It definitely deserves winning the Gold. When can I get an appointment?

    • Many thanks for your comment, I'm glad you enjoyed it. It looks as though a number of people want his services

      Sue

  • hmm yes, can i stand in line for one of these??

    thank you for entering


  • Touchof1der silver member
    April 14, 2008

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    I could almost feel the pressing of those hands on my own back and I nearly let a contented sigh slips from my lips. This was well penned with great flow and imagery. I enjoyed this piece. Best wishes to you in all of your endeavors and thank you for sharing. Keep that pen handy and ever ready for use dear poet. Good luck in the contest!
    ♥ Touchof1der


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 7, 2008

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    Ohhhh now I want to go out and have a massage!! I definitely need one to loosen the tense and release the pain.. and you made it sound so fabulous and enticing! Excellent write!

  • Rudolf
    April 5, 2008

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    I think you'll win, its apparent to me
    a trophy is waiting, appears gold to be
    I pictured romancing, hot passion hot play
    a focused intention, Twin desires I'd say
    so reread it again, it made good sense
    massaging the muscles, relaxed the tense
    rudolf


  • breedluv gold member
    April 3, 2008
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    "you massaged my heart".....what a turn of phrase. Awesome, Sue

  • Rudolf
    April 3, 2008
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    simply amazing, words you select
    massage the mind, flows so prefect
    rudolf


  • arafura gold member
    April 3, 2008
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    Sounds like Jaun certainly had that special "touch"! Well done!

  • silver20moon
    April 3, 2008
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    great

    i loved this poem as having a stiff neck tonight ,..you made me long for one as well


  • ceegeeess
    April 3, 2008

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    warmth of love

    Sweet lubrication
    as there on the bed
    all the stress and worry
    flew out of my head."warm touch of the beloved leads to romance and enhance excitement to cool and relax. Love is really great. Nice write sweet Sue!


  • moonbumps silver member
    April 3, 2008

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    I love it when I get a massage-professionally done when the person knows exactly where to go and how to do it-Blissfull-the image you portray is just mmmmmm....zzzzz....
    love you
    Hilly


  • pantress silver member
    April 3, 2008

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    oh how I enjoy a great massage. On second thought it doesn't even have to be that good,lol. your poem really brought me there, as if I was lying on the table, with magical hands upon me.... thanks for the massage. jen

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